Break the story. Shape the script. Punch up the jokes. Match the right comedy to the wrong audience, and bluff your way from a damp room on the Fringe to Head of Comedy.
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Series 1 · Episode 1 · “The First Draft”
DRAFT
Personnel · Form NS/1
New Starter Record
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REPORT FOR DUTY ▸
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Commissioning · the brief
What are you making, and for whom?
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Your script reads
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Before you start · the room
Staff the production
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Writers’ room
More writers means a bigger hand of scenes to choose from, and more alternate jokes at the punch-up.
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Rehearsal days
A run-through smooths the rough edges. Each day spent makes the broadcast night a little less of a gamble.
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Script editor
A senior pen to read the whole thing cold. Tightens the shape, finds a punch you walked past, and quietly saves you from yourself.
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INTO THE ROOM ▸
The story so far
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↻ Deal another set
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Pick the line you’d actually keep. The room won’t tell you which is funniest — that’s rather the job.